ESSAY 1



Essay 1


Score: 1

There is an attempt to address the prompt ("to see that my girlfriend and I get married and a healthy baby"), but there is little or no development. There are few details except that the admission that achieving the goal will be difficult. Control of sentence structure and EAE is minimal. Confusion of homonyms, omission of commas, and spelling errors are all demonstrated in the following sentence: "I now it will be hard to do but I am willing to take all responable and take care of her and my child."

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